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How oceans came to be  

senfully 55F  
618 posts
3/15/2021 6:47 am
How oceans came to be

How oceans came to be
written March 15th, 2021

Tears fall
from eyes
wetting cheeks
running in rivulets
down bodies
drenching the earth
until it can hold no more
so the waters rise
becoming a salt water ocean
created from tears
that fell
from eyes.

fang070 53M
1309 posts
3/15/2021 8:33 am

 Beautiful.

It just bring to mind, Kypling's "Just So Stories"
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senfully replies on 3/16/2021 3:10 am:
thank you for reading me and commenting!

kamaruhl3 63M
4985 posts
3/15/2021 8:41 am

 this is beautiful.


senfully replies on 3/16/2021 3:10 am:
Always happy to see you here. hugs.

boobwhisperer69 61M  
8322 posts
3/15/2021 9:15 am

 Having a bad day??????


senfully replies on 3/16/2021 3:11 am:
Actually not a bad day. Thank you for reading me and commenting.

69ereatwetpussy 61M
6774 posts
3/15/2021 9:35 am

 Cry
Cry all you need
Cry all you want
Flood the world
It will still turn
Around and around
Your trouble will be
Wipe your years
Hold your head up
Be the person you want to be
Be proud of yourself
Be proud of things you've done
If you not done enough
Work on trying for better days.
Let your tears be tears of joy.


senfully replies on 3/16/2021 3:12 am:
Hello there. I always enjoy reading your responses. Thank you for writing to me! Hugs!

hippiechick1967 60F  
13154 posts
3/15/2021 12:11 pm

 That would explain why the earth is 75% water.
Elevate me...


senfully replies on 3/16/2021 3:13 am:
yup. always glad to see you here. thanks for reading me and responding. hope you're doing as ok as possible.

MrWrong4RghtNow 57M
2439 posts
3/15/2021 5:53 pm

 I like it. Interestingly enough I have been ruminating over a rain themed poem using tears from the sky. Great minds.
My name is MrWrong and I approved this comment


senfully replies on 3/16/2021 3:15 am:
There are very few ideas that are original, probably none lol. I knew that as I wrote this. I still liked how it turned out. I know with the books I read, I love when something feels different, unique. Maybe it's the same with poems. It's how you tell the story. Always happy to see you MrW. Hugs!

OldTeacher5 67M

3/17/2021 2:38 pm

 This reminds me of both Native creation myths and the Blues song 'The Sky is Crying'. Who's to say that either are wrong? Maybe Elmore James knew more than we ever gave him credit for.


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